Today, I decided that the first draft of the shaping process of my text was too disconnected, in a way that the Cummings poem should be interlinked with the other two.
Julian Philips also recommended to use the Cummings poem as a main topic, main gesture but having the others as important counterpoints and sometime as melodies.
Confusing the listener, making them thinking in one melody as main one, but then have other as a main gesture.
So, I re-shaped the text and the result was (image 1)
Image 1 - draft 2 - framing my texts